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I am a nerdfighter. A harry potter fanatic. DOCTOR WHO is life. Who has met John Green at a book signing. And has an obsession with reading.

Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Crappy Poem.... ftw?

So i feel bad for not posting anything here for a while so i'm gonna post a crappy poem we had to write in english. the assignment was to write a 6 stanza free verse poem. Each stanza had to be a different memory from our childhood, so yup. Heres my poem... oh and don't make fun of me...

The play train, the presents, the food, the family
The play train circling around the tree
The play train with Santa on the back
Christmas eve dinners, with the family

Waiting in line, to get on the ride
At Disney World waiting in line for Splash Mountain
At Disney World for the first time
Waiting, riding, having fun

Swimming in the pool
Swimming underwater
Ready to jump, plugging my nose
Falling to the bottom and shooting back up

Pink tutu, pink tights, pick ballet shoes
Twirling and leaping on stage
Recieving a golden trophy
My first time dancing on stage

First day of school, nervous, shaking
Holding and hiding behind my mom's leg
Finally letting go and walking in the room
Meeting new people, and making friends

Nigh falls, and the tent is ready
Everyone huddles near the fire
Trying to keep warm, surronded by friends
No sleep that night.

and thats the crappy poem. Happy Reading, and have a good week <33
-- Haley <3

3 comments:

  1. I don't think it's crappy at all! I think it's very vivid, very evocative. Each stanza had a solid memory with great sensory details! Nicely done.

    P.S. John Green is a total rock star. Love him! You know he lives in my town? ;)

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  2. I hope you occassionally stop by your blog and post again because this was a great poem! I'm with Carolina I didn't think it was crappy at all!

    I'm a new follower and have to say anyone who is a Harry Potter fanatic is a friend of mine!

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  3. So cool :) Don't get down on yourself, not crappy at all!

    Sarah Allen
    (my creative writing blog)


    p.s. Dr. Who, eh? David Tennant or Matt Smith? Huge DT fan right here. He's way too adorable to be allowed.

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